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i took a wrong turn~
« on: November 25, 2012, 07:46:24 pm »
Jessiepaw bounded along the ShadowClan border, sniffing for food. Finally, the young tom scented a rabbit. Moments later, he saw the brown fluff of fur and dashed after it, his muscular legs pumping beneath him. After time, Jessiepaw was standing over the dead rodent, a smile across his face. But as he lifted his head to scent the air, it wasn't ShadowClan, it was...WindClan?! The tom picked up the rabbit quickly and began to shuffle back into his territory, hoping no one would see or smell him.


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Re: i took a wrong turn~
« Reply #1 on: November 25, 2012, 07:49:26 pm »
Rosepaw yawned, sniffing the air cautiously. She smelled a foreign smell, it smelled kinda sour. She trotted towards it, claws unsheathed. "W-who's there?" she said warily. The she-cat apprentice blinked, flexing her claws and waiting for a reply to her call.
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Re: i took a wrong turn~
« Reply #2 on: November 25, 2012, 07:51:18 pm »
Jessiepaw gulped. "Er, um, Jessiepaw." he admitted quietly, flicking his tail nervously.


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Re: i took a wrong turn~
« Reply #3 on: November 25, 2012, 07:53:31 pm »
Rosepaw tapped her claws on the soft earth. "And what exactly are you doing here, Jessiepaw?" The apprentice asked and rolled her eyes. Who did this apprentice think he was, parading around like no ones business?!
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Re: i took a wrong turn~
« Reply #4 on: November 25, 2012, 08:06:43 pm »
Jessiepaw glanced at the ground, his claws sliding in and out. "It was an accident." he grumbled, annoyed that this apprentice was bossing him around. Hadn't she ever made a mistake? The tom shook out his long fur, something that looked nothing like his sisters short creamy fur. Jessiepaw glanced at the rabbit he had set at his paws, biting his lip.


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Re: i took a wrong turn~
« Reply #5 on: November 25, 2012, 08:09:43 pm »
The Windclan apprentice narrowed her eyes and sighed "Where did you catch it? 'Fess up" Rosepaw said, glancing back and forth at the fresh kill. Rosepaw could feel the tension between the  two building up. She didn't like that. It made her fur crawl.
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Re: i took a wrong turn~
« Reply #6 on: November 25, 2012, 08:15:47 pm »
Jessiepaw glared at Rosepaw and lashed his tail. "Oh, why does it matter? Just take it." he grumbled, kicking the rabbit over to Rosepaw. "I don't even like rabbit, anyways." Well, that was a lie. But it wasn't his. Thinking he was done, the tom turned his back and began padding back into the marshy forests of ShadowClan, ignoring the hunger gnawing at him.


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Re: i took a wrong turn~
« Reply #7 on: November 25, 2012, 08:19:54 pm »
Rosepaw blinked and then felt a pang of sympathy. She hated it, but she knew she should give him the rabbit. "Wait!" She yelled out reluctuantly. "Come back Jessiepaw!"
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Re: i took a wrong turn~
« Reply #8 on: November 25, 2012, 08:23:28 pm »
Jessiepaw turned his head. "Yes?" he meowed, dragging the word out. What did she want? To take him to her leader?


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Re: i took a wrong turn~
« Reply #9 on: November 25, 2012, 08:25:54 pm »
"Here!" Rosepaw yelled and tossed the rabbit his way. "You look like you need it more then me" she called to him.
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Re: i took a wrong turn~
« Reply #10 on: November 25, 2012, 09:08:26 pm »
Jessiepaw's eyes widened. "T-thank you." he meowed, picking up the rabbit and slowly walking off, glancing at Rosepaw every few moments.


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Re: i took a wrong turn~
« Reply #11 on: November 26, 2012, 05:13:11 am »
Rosepaw look down, tracing a random cirle in the dirt with her paw. "Oh it's nothing"  the apprentice mewed quickly, blushing under her pelt.
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« Reply #12 on: November 26, 2012, 09:32:22 am »
At that, Jessiepaw bounded off back into ShadowClan territory. Once he was safely home, the tom felt himself blushing under his pelt. Why was he blushing? It was a WindClan she-cat. He couldn't have a crush on her! Did he?

Who cares, he was going back tomorrow!

Jessiepaw dropped off his prey just as Cherrypaw limped out of the medicine cat den. "How's your leg?" he questioned. His sister shrugged. "Getting better. Want to share that rabbit with me?" Jessiepaw shrugged, dropping to his stomach. "Sure." he meowed, taking a bit. Cherrypaw bit in, then spit it out. "Ew, Jessiepaw! Did you catch this on WindClan territory? It's tasteless!" Jessiepaw, not paying attention to his sister, didn't answer. He was lost in thought.

"Jessiepaw!" Cherrypaw meowed, nudging him. Jessiepaw shot his head up. "What?" he mumbled, rising to his paws clumsily. Cherrypaw snorted. "I asked you a question." The tom just shrugged and walked away, leaving the rabbit and his confused sister.

That night, Jessiepaw lay curled up in his mossy nest but not sleeping. That was one thing the tom couldn't do. But finally, he felt himself drifting off. The next morning, Jessiepaw woke up extra early so he could get out of camp unnoticed. The tom slipped past Spiderwick, who was on patrol, and then sprinted to the border. Why was he doing this? He was going to get caught! I have to see Rosepaw.


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Re: i took a wrong turn~
« Reply #13 on: November 26, 2012, 04:06:05 pm »
Rosepaw stumbled back to camp in a daze. Why had she given that cat the rabbit? Mousebrain she scolded herself and looked at the ground. Why had she given the fresh kill to the Shadowclan apprentice? It was something about his eyes that seemed to put her in a trance. Rosepaw shook her head as to clear the thoughts for her mind.whatever.

 "Hey Rosepaw!" a sudden voice that sounded like smooth silk interrupted her thoughts.

     "Huh?" Rosepaw mewed, strangely not recognizing the voice.  The gray tabbys head shot up, searching for the source of the voice. She saw a figure looming over her. It was her own sister! How couldn't have she recognized her? "Oh hi Moonpaw." she mewed, not really interested in making conversation with her sister. Rosepaw studied her sisters features, her muscles clearly showing and her black-as-night pelt shining. Rosepaw hated how horrible she looked compared to her better looking sister.

"Whatever. You're clearly not interested in talking to me." Moonpaw mewed bluntly and bounded over to her popular friends. Moonpaw smiled flirtily to Rowanpaw, a tom she obviously liked. Rosepaw rolled her eyes and sighed, then looked beside her.

 No one was there.

Rosepaw had no trouble sleeping, she was worn out. She stared at the twinkling stars she could clearly see from the gaping hole in the apprentice den. She smiled to herself, thinking about the apprentice she had met. Rosepaw drifted off, a grin imprinted on her face and butterflies, no scratch that, a whole zoo running around in her stomach.

She woke up, the beautiful stars replaced by a bright yellow sun. Rosepaw smiled and headed to the border where she had been yesterday. She knew he probably wouldn't be there, but she reminiscenced on yesterday.

 
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Re: i took a wrong turn~
« Reply #14 on: November 26, 2012, 06:52:27 pm »
Jessiepaw walked along the border, paying attention to his surroundings. Finally, he scented Rosepaw. "Rosepaw?" he meowed, genuinely surprised. He hadn't expected her to show up. "Hi." he said quickly, blushing. "Why are you here?"


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